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Some people say that watching TV programmes and movies related to crime are popular. Why do you think it’s popular and how does it affect society?

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Nowadays, the way
people
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 entertain themselves is different from how
people
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 in the past. If we compare,
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 in the past were entertained by comedy
movies
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 and amusing TV shows, yet currently, there are several genres of
movies
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 and TV shows that can be watched to entertain ourselves. One of them is
crime
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movies
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 which are becoming my
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 film and TV shows to watch. In my opinion, it may be because there are a lot of criminal issues in our
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 nowadays.
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, the impact of
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 popularity is that the opportunity of criminality will be increase.
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 and foremost, the cause of
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 phenomenon is the curiosity of
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 about types of
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, how villain act and
behavior
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, and how to avoid it. As we know, in the
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 few decades, the number of criminal problems increase significantly.
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,
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 have a concern about
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 issue to protect themselves from the knowledge they get from films.
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, most criminal films were started from real-life stories. Generally, the content of the movie and drama is about the type of
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 action, why someone does that, how their appearance in
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, and how to prevent it.
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, there is
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 the negative impact of
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 popularity in
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 which is the growing number of criminal problems. More
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 will know how criminals do their actions and how to get them into jail.
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 situation can initiate opportunities for criminals because they can avoid any possibility they will get caught by police and they will be more creative in action.
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, in the
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 few years, I have read and watched the news about criminal cases in my country. And most of the cases were similar to films and dramas that I have watched.
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,
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 is like from the true story to the movie and return to real life but in a creative way. To conclude, I believe that there are advantages and disadvantages in watch
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movies
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 and dramas. The positive is may
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 can avoid it in
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 because of the knowledge they get from
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.
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, the negative is it can aid to raise the number of criminal issues in our
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Intricate plots
  • Suspenseful storytelling
  • Unexpected twists
  • Psychological appeal
  • Curiosity
  • Safe exploration
  • Criminal behavior
  • Relatability
  • Identification
  • Pursuit of justice
  • Moral dilemmas
  • Human struggle
  • Educational aspect
  • Law enforcement system
  • Practical self-defense tips
  • Raise awareness
  • Social commentary
  • Corruption
  • Inequality
  • Effectiveness of the justice system
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