In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Importance of the old

generation

versus the younger one which was always a hotly debatable topic without any qualms has now become more controversial with many people claiming that

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is more valued while others reject

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notion and emphasize youth is key

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. In my

opinion

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the latter proposition appears to

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rational.

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essay will

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elaborate my views for

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the positive impact of

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with the

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notion there are myriad things to be shared in its

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but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that

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generation

is substantial valuable asses for any country.

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nowadays companies prefer to

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youths due to ton of reasons

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as they perform longer hours per week due to energetic and actively participate in a range of programme they lead to wellbeing of a company as well presenting crucial ideas and strategies to boost the income.

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they bring

diversity

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a diversity

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of logical thoughts due to vast academic background and fresh knowledge enables a company to perform excel and problem solver and tend to do work in

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the high

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paced environment.

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is a persuasive reason why these

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are

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the most necessary things in

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modern world.

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view

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a high weight and cannot be ignored. Moving towards the

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argument of

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debate the

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point of issue is that some powerful

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seldom to their old

generation

because they are more experienced and contributed major parts of life.

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people who are 65 years old and devoted more than 40 years of life consider key valuable assets due to

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amount of experience and lessor mistakes. apart from

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some countries play utmost attention to their old

generation

for taking valuable input for a crucial decision

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as a result

it

become

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apparent

these

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generation

has vital footprints due to

multi exposure

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. To recapitulate according to the arguments mentioned above one can reach to

conclusion

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the conclusion

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that the younger

generation

is vital in future prospect and lead a role for all aspects for all mankind.