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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It’s
 been observed that competition in
sports
 is influencing the young of
this
 era. Some
people
 believe that
it’s
 healthy and good for one’s development especially when it comes to their education while others are not true believers in
this
. They think that
it’s
 leaving a poor effect on teenagers’ education.
Although
sports
 are healthy activities for the human body, its effect varies from person to person. Because of the multiple advantages of
sports
,
it’s
 considered a healthy activity. When it comes to
competitions
, passion to win contributes towards polishing one’s personality. A part of the population is in
favor
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 of
such
competitions
 in which teenagers can learn to progress and win. Passion to win can play a vital role in someone’s educational history. So,
people
 believe that if someone is competitive in
sports
, they will have the same attitude for their education.
On the contrary
,
people
also
 think that when someone fails in any
sports
 competition, they get negative vibes, which causes too many unavoidable situations like politics, jealousy, and so on. One can do anything to win which can harm others.
It’s
 not limited to
this
 only but they can join any extreme which can be disastrous for anyone involving that competition. Summarizing the idea, I would say that competitive
sports
 are good if they are conducted with the right terms.
Competitions
 make one more proactive and smart. Rules should be fair enough to accommodate all involved parties.
Although
 some
people
 are not in
favor
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 of
this
, we can educate them by conducting healthy
sports
competitions
 in every educational department.
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