In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many
car
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cars
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manufactures
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develop
driverless
vehicles. It means that there will be no passengers inside the cars. I quite disagree with the statement.
This
essay will simplify my disagreement on the topic.
To begin
, with chief reasons among all I would say that there are still many
people
that need the
job
as a driver. If many vehicles are made
driverless
, there will be a large number of
people
jobless.
For instance
, in my
country
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there are many
people
that could not work in the office.
Instead
, they try their fortune in the taxi agency as a driver. If the company stops the
job
for a driver, it means that there are many individuals
lose
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who lose
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their
job
.
Moreover
, individuals could not supply their
families
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family's
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need. Governments should work together with the cars agency to handle
this
issue. I believe that there is a solution for
this
problem
such
as they can make a vehicle
driverless
yet the government needs to limit the quota about it.
Thus
, many
people
still have the
job
to feed the family. no one will suffer from
this
issue. In conclusion, I disagree if the cars agency
want
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to be
driverless
because it will suffer many
people
in the
job
fields.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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