some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue saying that it would be better to educate
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separately.
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, there are people who think that
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benefit more if taught in mixed-
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separating
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as more concentration during the lesson, I believe that mixing
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during school years, prepares them for later on in life how to work in an environment with people who are different genders.
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with,
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that attend institutions that are just for
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may be able to focus more when receiving lessons.
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means that there are fewer distractions from the opposite sex,
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behave ,all the same, share the same interests about their hobbies and ideas, and
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teachers have more time to focus on teaching rather than spending their time-solving disagreements that might occur during a lesson.
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, it is commonly known that those
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who attend
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have higher academic grades than those who attend mixed-
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, in my ,opinion these
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would find it more difficult to communicate in a working environment when they become adults. The primary reason that I think
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should be mixed in
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is that they get used to cooperating, communicating and socialising with the opposite sex.
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means that when they are adults, they will not struggle to get engaged with other genders, it will come naturally to cooperate, communicate and engage with everyone around them despite their
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, those people who have attended mixed-
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schools
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, have better communication skills when mixing with another
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, whether it is at work or at home. In conclusion,
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, separating
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in
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by their
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might have some benefits
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as they might be able to focus more in lessons and
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they might receive better grades,
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, they are likely to lack other skills
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as miscommunication with the opposite
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when they become adults.For those reasons, I believe that youngsters should attend the same institute.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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