Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

Nowadays,
information
is paramount for our life.Some people think we should share
information
as possible we can.While other people think some important
information
is not convenient to be share.In my opinion,I think we should keep some personally or some valuable
information
. On the one hand,science research,business or academic can not advance as soon as well without
information
.
Firstly
,take the COVID-19 vaccine as an example, a science can not make the vaccine for the
first
time without all
country
's
information
.Even confirmed cases and death cases are useful
information
for the research.
Secondly
,some business development or academic need fresh
information
about industries.We can't imagine life without
information
.
On the other hand
,some
information
maybe it is personally.There are serval reasons that are why I think we should not share all the
information
.
Firstly
, criminals maybe will use some private
information
to do crimes.
For example
, a thief who steals valuable goods will search the tag before.At
this
time,your all
information
in social media becomes useful
information
for the thief.
Secondly
,it is about
country
safety.Some news about
country
insurance and the army should keep it as secret.It is not only for the
country
leader but
also
for the peace. In conclusion,for personal or countries safely,people should keep some paramount
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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