Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many health problems, including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

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their effects on health.These issues should be discussed globally in every house. As we see the trend of packed food increased globally and the government and manufacturers of

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pushing their citizens and customers toward pre-cooked food. Whenever there will be any celebration there will be ready eat stuff.

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creates many issues for an individual who is consuming these type of products like potato chips are high in fat and salt, which causes problems to the heart and raise the issue of blood pressure. The fat in chips is responsible for the increase in weight of the person and make them overweight. The majority of the young generation provoked to consume

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type of product via various means of communication like advertisement on television, Posts on social media like Instagram and Facebook which showcase the product as refreshment which is full of taste and best suitable for parties. Once the person starts purchasing these types of items, it becomes their habit and starts depending on

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products should be discussed on the various platforms with a high pitch. Parents should keep their eyes on the children's eating habits and analyse

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. Schools and doctors together should run the program on various types of food available in the market to educate the parents as well as the children.

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processed food
fast food
nutritional education
calorie-dense
nutrient-poor
convenience
busy lifestyles
food deserts
marketing and advertising
food choices
cultural norms
food preparation
obesity
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