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Do yoy agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mothematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some people consider that it's the most significant study about history and
literature
 than science and mathematics.
However
, I disagree with
this
 belief since, in my point of view, the
last
 two subjects are extremely important for us in our daily life. In
this
 essay,
first
 I will show some reasons to support
this
 idea, starting to give examples of using each one and,
secondly
, saying why the others are less useful.
To begin
 with, it's clearly evident that human beings are immersed in a complex system that it's guided by science. In
this
 way, areas
such
 as chemistry and biology are two of the subjects most useful in our routine. The
first
 can be used during activities
such
 as cooking and washing the dishes when we use soap to remove the grass from some plate. The other one helps us in a large number of issues since to avoid diseases, like infections, until how to protect the environment by recycling the trash and waste less water.
Furthermore
, Maths, which can have the same importance that physics, has a crucial role in financial and business areas, especially to manage the count of our house, avoiding debts as well as saving money.
Moreover
, it can help when we are driving our car or cooking once we need to know about the proportions of speed and food, respectively.
On the other hand
, history and
Literature
 can't give the same benefits. Despite they contribute to understanding our ancients and explaining why some things are happening nowadays, they both just can illustrate events in the past that we might not live again.
Moreover
,
Literature
 is an expression of the human being for how
this
 one has faced a challenge during its age.
However
, I can't see how
this
 could influence essential activities. Summing up, there are huge and various examples of how science and mathematics can influence our lives.
In addition
, both of them have incredible usefulness in our life, mainly in our daily necessities, differing
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
 the meaning of history and
literature
.
Submitted by lufemurta on

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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