Do yoy agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mothematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some people consider that it's the most significant study about history and

literature

than science and mathematics.

However

, I disagree with

this

belief since, in my point of view, the

last

two subjects are extremely important for us in our daily life. In

this

essay,

first

I will show some reasons to support

this

idea, starting to give examples of using each one and,

secondly

, saying why the others are less useful.

To begin

with, it's clearly evident that human beings are immersed in a complex system that it's guided by science. In

this

way, areas

such

as chemistry and biology are two of the subjects most useful in our routine. The

first

can be used during activities

such

as cooking and washing the dishes when we use soap to remove the grass from some plate. The other one helps us in a large number of issues since to avoid diseases, like infections, until how to protect the environment by recycling the trash and waste less water.

Furthermore

, Maths, which can have the same importance that physics, has a crucial role in financial and business areas, especially to manage the count of our house, avoiding debts as well as saving money.

Moreover

, it can help when we are driving our car or cooking once we need to know about the proportions of speed and food, respectively.

On the other hand

, history and

Literature

can't give the same benefits. Despite they contribute to understanding our ancients and explaining why some things are happening nowadays, they both just can illustrate events in the past that we might not live again.

Moreover

Literature

is an expression of the human being for how

this

one has faced a challenge during its age.

However

, I can't see how

this

could influence essential activities. Summing up, there are huge and various examples of how science and mathematics can influence our lives.

In addition

, both of them have incredible usefulness in our life, mainly in our daily necessities, differing

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the meaning of history and

literature

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

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Relevant & specific examples

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holistic education
critical thinking
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