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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As an individual, we all have different perspectives and ideas on how we want to live our lives. In terms of
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, it can quite daunting for some
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 whereas,
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, some
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 love changes.
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 can be identified as both good and bad depending on an individual's perception and preference. On one hand, some
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 welcome
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 with their open arms as they are not afraid of
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. I believe the reason behind feeling
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 way is because
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 brings many good opportunities and it helps you to gain confidence in
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.
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, bringing
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 in your diet and maintaining healthy eating habits.
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 can be a good thing as it will make you healthier and perhaps provide you more confidence over time about your body.
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,
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 can be quite challenging if it is spontaneous and you have no control over it. In my opinion, we all in some ways want to be in control of our own lives.
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, sometimes it might not be the case which creates stress.
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, you've been working in a company for 6 years and now you recently received a message about your transfer to a different location.
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 brings uncertainty and might be quite difficult to manage. In conclusion, all
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 have their own opinion about
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, some prefer it whereas some defy it. But, for me,
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 is something that keeps me moving in
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. My personality is fun and outgoing which makes it hard for me to do the same things in
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 over and over again. I prefer '
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' as it makes
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 more spontaneous which it should be.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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