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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their parent. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

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It is believed that kids should always be near their
parents
 in their leisure
time
. But, there is
also
an
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another point of view, that it could have a
nagative
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negative
 effect on
children
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both statements and the probable arguments on them. Speaking about me , I am on the side, that it is not obligate for
children
 to spend their free
time
 with their mom and dad.
To begin
 with, some part of society is convinced that the young ones have to be beside their mother or father all the
time
. They want it to be in
this
 way so much
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 because they want to know that their kid is in a safe place where nothing could damage them.
For instance
, when a child is somewhere away from their
parents
, they are not under control and it could make
parents
 worry about them.
However
, there is the other opinion about that. People believe that
children
 have to be in their free of school
time
 with their peers and have a good
time
 with them. It makes the child more sociable and more open to the world. Because it could have a negative impact on them if they are constantly with their
parents
, they could become shy and scared when they come to
a
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 company of other kids.
Therefore
,
this
 point of view is more
benefical
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beneficial
 for everyone. To conclude, there are good arguments from both sides.
Although
, I am on the side of only one opinion. I believe
,
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 that
child
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 will be more adjusted to the world if they spend their
time
 with other
children
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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