You Recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say:- • Why you moved there • Describe the new apartment • Invite him to visit you.

Dear Precious I hope

this

letter finds you well,I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I have relocated to Edenvale.Even though it wasn't an easy decision to make but I am now getting used to the area. I had to move to Edenvale because it is close to my workplace so I don't have to worry about any fuel price hikes anymore,I was tired of spending hours stuck in traffic from Primrose.Now I get to spend more time with my family and get to prepare some delicious meals! It is a very spacious three-bedroom apartment with an open plan kitchen,not forgetting my master bedroom with a walk-in closet.I love sipping on a cup of coffee early in the morning at my backyard garden,another bonus is that the apartment is very close to a shopping mall. I would really like you to come for a sleepover

week on a Saturday

then

we can have some drinks.I can't wait to hear from you! your friend Esther

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

168 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You Recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say:- • Why you moved there • Describe the new apartment • Invite him to visit you.

The Closing

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?

Nowadays，young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

some people beleive that it is important to keep the home and the work place tidy and organized. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.