Advancement in transportation has enabled people to travel extensivety. Does travel help to promote understanding and communication between two countries?

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Nowadays Due to transportation society

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more compared to the past. And

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they easily

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anywhere because of

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advancement.

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countries

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countries'

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population

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populations

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know each other and understand

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another crowd

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statement in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, Individuals are trip for many reasons

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as wedding, Birthday party, business meeting, Study-related part, visit some new places and so on.

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, In the present, people like to visit different places and gain knowledge about that place. So the public learns that culture and

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share their cultures with other citizens. Instant if society

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for any reason

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they have to communicate with other citizens. And

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why they understand each other and share their experiences with each other.

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, students and Businessmen more

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compared to other public.

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, Mukesh Ambani who has a famous daily businessman all over the world. And Due to his ,work He has to

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daily On different place and meet other individuals who are in different cultures.

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, they share their problem and get that solution. And students go abroad for their higher education. There he or she communicate with different countries community and leam something about the culture and

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tell the student about their cultures and other things. In conclusion, progress in transportation has individual

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easily and

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in less time.

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, the public learns so many things from travelling. And

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meet different types of personality public.

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thing teaches us to understand different countries' citizens.

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Advancement in transportation has enabled people to travel extensivety. Does travel help to promote understanding and communication between two countries?

Your opinion

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people buy local food?

Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be care about it?

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities whether they only know a few people in their area. Advantages and disadvantages of living in small communities?

Too much emphasis is given for education of the young children. Moregovernment money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays, this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.