you have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: * what your suggestion is   * why you think this suggestion will improve the park   * when you would like to see this suggestion in action

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I am writing

this

letter to outline some area of Willson park area needs some improvement. As the condition is not appropriate. Allow me to explain the scenario. I visited that area yesterday for jogging after a long time and once I started walking on the track, I faced a lot of issues, like the track having an uneven surface and

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potholes.

Although

I didn’t get hurt on the track. So I manage to walk a bit far and saw the tremendously damaged sight of the lawn. Which Showed that no one is concerned about the cleaning of the park and it stinking profusely.As you can imagine the situation of the park.

However

the walls need to repair and must be

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a repaint

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, as we turn around towards the walking path, it desperately looking for filling and levering. I would like to bring an idea to grow the plant which will grow year-around.   I am sure that it is not only me who wrote

this

letter to you regarding various issues. On the other side, I am looking to resolve the concerns that have been shown. Whatsoever we are looking forward to solving the stated problems as early as possible.   I deeply appreciate your overview of

this

matter.

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you have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: * what your suggestion is * why you think this suggestion will improve the park * when you would like to see this suggestion in action

The Greeting

Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy a wide variety of foods transported from all over the world. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?

Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

you have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: * what your suggestion is   * why you think this suggestion will improve the park   * when you would like to see this suggestion in action