you have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: * what your suggestion is   * why you think this suggestion will improve the park   * when you would like to see this suggestion in action

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letter to outline some area of Willson park area needs some improvement. As the condition is not appropriate. Allow me to explain the scenario. I visited that area yesterday for jogging after a long time and once I started walking on the track, I faced a lot of issues, like the track having an uneven surface and

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potholes.

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I didn’t get hurt on the track. So I manage to walk a bit far and saw the tremendously damaged sight of the lawn. Which Showed that no one is concerned about the cleaning of the park and it stinking profusely.As you can imagine the situation of the park.

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the walls need to repair and must be

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, as we turn around towards the walking path, it desperately looking for filling and levering. I would like to bring an idea to grow the plant which will grow year-around.   I am sure that it is not only me who wrote

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letter to you regarding various issues. On the other side, I am looking to resolve the concerns that have been shown. Whatsoever we are looking forward to solving the stated problems as early as possible.   I deeply appreciate your overview of

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matter.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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