Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that volunteering for
community
services
without being paid should be involved in secondary schools' curriculum
. Fix the agreement mistake
curricula
However
, I strongly disagree with this
assertion as it is not feasible.
To begin
with, in this
competitive society, academic perforation plays key
factor in getting a better job in the future. Add an article
a key
Therefore
, not only does
parents push their kids to study academic subjects, but Change the verb form
do
students
may also
study them instead
of spending their time on
involving Change preposition
apply
community
services
. For example
, a survey conducted by the Korean Education Foundation has revealed that almost 30% of parents are against their kids working for communities since they believe children
should use their time on studying rather than volunteering. As the example clearly illustrates, as people do not want their children
to volunteer for community
services
, mandatory volunteering will be rejected.
Next
, although
schools suggest volunteering services
, students
will not do them sincerely as they cannot get a visible outcome since children
tend not to do their best without proper rewards. For instance
, recent media in Korea reports that about half of students
haven't done volunteering. instead
, they just have gotten signs on reports from reletives
or Correct your spelling
relatives
neighbors
without working. Change the spelling
neighbours
Therefore
, it is reasonable to point out that unpaid work for communities among students
is not realistic.
In conclusion, there is no doubt to point out that unpaid-mandatory community
service at schools cannot be operated since parents prefer their kids to study academic subjects, and children
will not willing to work it.Submitted by hiasince38 on
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