Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some
people
argue that
advertisement
has played a significant role in the world of marketing and
became
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a successful practice for companies to influence consumers’ buying
decision
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while it is commonly believed that these make it a normal thing. In my opinion, advertising highly contributed to the companies’ wealth even it is prevalent
to
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people
’s perspective. On the one hand, strong persuasion through advertising can generate profits
to
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organisations in terms of selling their products, promoting their uniqueness and differentiating from competitors.
This
is due to the seducing content and messages that can brainwash
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by the frequent occurrence of
advertisement
in many channels and
as a
result
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make
people
are craving to try.
For example
, Kellogs, a cereal brand, repeated their adverts of eating Kellogs as your breakfast will give you energy for the rest of the day. In
consumers
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point of view, they want to try whether it is true or not so they eventually
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to the
advertisement
at
last
. Undoubtedly, why
advertising
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committed
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to companies’ higher sales.
On the other hand
, the frequency of adverts may have
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consequence
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to
people
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negative attitudes
such
as boredom, frustration and annoyance.
In other words
,
people
will see those as a mere everyday routine
then
cease to pay attention. Even worse, they may decide to turn off their platforms if there is one shown nearby.
Thus
, the main objective of
advertisement
is not complete since their target
do
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not receive
that
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messages. A good example can be seen in
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social media, Youtube. Its mechanism is to force
people
to watch the video until the end by placing ads in between the video
people
is watching.
However
,
this
is not actually the case, as many
people
would just click “Skip Ad”
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and
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continue on. In conclusion,
advertisement
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the advertisement
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may somehow be tolerated
to
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the consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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yet it still be the major source of income
to
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the business
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business
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businesses
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.
Nonetheless
, companies should consider the content ideation that would influence
consumer
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consumers
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otherwise
it will appear to be a common ad
which
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that
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people
always skip.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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