Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some
people
argue that Use synonyms
advertisement
has played a significant role in the world of marketing and Use synonyms
became
a successful practice for companies to influence consumers’ buying Wrong verb form
become
decision
while it is commonly believed that these make it a normal thing. In my opinion, advertising highly contributed to the companies’ wealth even it is prevalent Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
to
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in
people
’s perspective.
On the one hand, strong persuasion through advertising can generate profits Use synonyms
to
organisations in terms of selling their products, promoting their uniqueness and differentiating from competitors. Change preposition
for
This
is due to the seducing content and messages that can brainwash Linking Words
consumer
by the frequent occurrence of Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
advertisement
in many channels and Use synonyms
as a
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,result
people
are craving to try. Use synonyms
For example
, Kellogs, a cereal brand, repeated their adverts of eating Kellogs as your breakfast will give you energy for the rest of the day. In Linking Words
consumers
point of view, they want to try whether it is true or not so they eventually Change noun form
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consumers'
succumbing
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succumb
advertisement
at Use synonyms
last
. Undoubtedly, why Linking Words
advertising
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is advertising
committed
to companies’ higher sales.
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is committed
On the other hand
, the frequency of adverts may have Linking Words
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a consequence
consequence
to Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
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people
negative attitudes Change noun form
people's
such
as boredom, frustration and annoyance. Linking Words
In other words
, Linking Words
people
will see those as a mere everyday routine Use synonyms
then
cease to pay attention. Even worse, they may decide to turn off their platforms if there is one shown nearby. Linking Words
Thus
, the main objective of Linking Words
advertisement
is not complete since their target Use synonyms
do
not receive Change the verb form
does
that
messages. A good example can be seen in Correct pronoun usage
those
the
social media, Youtube. Its mechanism is to force Correct article usage
apply
people
to watch the video until the end by placing ads in between the video Use synonyms
people
is watching. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
is not actually the case, as many Linking Words
people
would just click “Skip Ad” Use synonyms
an
continue on.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
and
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advertisement
may somehow be tolerated Add an article
the advertisement
an advertisement
to
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by
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the consumer
consumer
yet it still be the major source of income Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
to
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for
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the business
business
. Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
Nonetheless
, companies should consider the content ideation that would influence Linking Words
consumer
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consumers
otherwise
it will appear to be a common ad Linking Words
which
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that
people
always skip.Use synonyms
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