Some people think that air travel should be reduced to protect the environment. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

During successive waves of globalization, people become actively conscious about their

environment

and the issue of mitigating travelling by

air

has ignited public attention from time to time. In my humble opinion , I partially agree with

this

view , and

this

essay will seek to examine the complex issue. On the one hand , some people who have

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concerns are quick to opine that it is very beneficial to the

environment

by limiting the

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of

air

travel . The

first

reason is that the growth in travelling by plane can lead to

the

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air

pollution which is massively detrimental to the

environment

.

In addition

, being easily accessible ,

flight

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the flight

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is solely

relied

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by most

travelers

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even if they will commute locally .

As a result

, it can adversely affect the income of

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public transportations

such

as buses and trains .

Therefore

, restraining on

air

travel is apparently advantageous to both the

environment

and

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society. In spite of having

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drawbacks of

air

travel, some people still assert that travelling by flight could bring numerous merits .

Firstly

, no wonder time and distances are not barriers anymore ,

plane

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is the easiest and safest mode of transportation . They could arrive

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places within

an

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easy reach.

Furthermore

, travelling by

air

can give comfort while travelling compared to

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transports which are always crowded and disgusting.

Thus

, they believe that it is worthwhile

although

it seems more expensive than the rest ones. Having both sides of opinions considered , both bright and dark sides occupy each face of any issue . In my point of view ,

although

there are some undesirable drawbacks to our surroundings , travelling by flight still benefits

to

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humans.