Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is undeniable that art gives meaning to our lives and helps us to understand our world.

However

, It is believed by a few

people

that the

government

budget should not be wasted on

arts

rather than allocating it for the betterment of the

people

. In my opinion, I completely agree with

this

opinion and believe

government

should

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the

arts

until basic human needs are not ensured thoroughly.

To begin

, there are several strong points to support the idea of allocating more funds in sectors like

education

, health and employment.

Firstly

,

education

is the backbone of a country. If any

governments

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failed to ensure

education

for all of its

people

, essentially, it will be a massive barrier

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the

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growth.

For example

, in developing countries,

government

schools are the primary sources for locals to get to see the light of

education

those

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who live in remote areas.

Secondly

, not

every one

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in a country

have

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the privilege to get proper treatment when it needs. To ensure

this

basis

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need for all,

government

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must need to allocate more budgets in

this

sector

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to others.

For instance

, lots of

people

in Bangladesh rely on

government

hospitals due to

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cost effectiveness

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compare

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to private hospitals.

Thirdly

, A higher unemployment rate is considered as a curse to its economic growth. Needless to say, to improve the lifestyle of a nation,

government

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need to make it certain that everyone has the opportunity to get a job. Failing to do so, cause a huge risk for brain drain and

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in crime rates.

This

ultimately

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the country

more

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weaker.

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as

,

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every

years

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lots of

people

migrated from developing countries to developed countries due to better job opportunities and better

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lifestyles

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life styles

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. To conclude, while basic needs are still in demand, developing in

arts

will not be beneficial for a

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share of its

people

.

Therefore

,

government

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need to make sure that the basic needs are properly ensured prior to thinking about funding

arts

.