Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that is runs, in order to save money write a letter to the local council.in your letter give detils of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and liesure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local peaple if the centre closes
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in hopes of convincing you not to close our leisure centre. Our family utilizes Linking Words
this
space as of form of socializing Linking Words
as well as
relieving all the work stress developed during the day. Spending time here has been a major part of our lives which we look forward to every evening.
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this
centre creates a platform for the people in the local community to connect Linking Words
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promoting physical activities that help them be fit and healthy. These connections built in turn develop a safer environment for the younger and elderly.
Even though the money saved by closing Linking Words
this
centre could be used to update the public services of the locality, it would remove a place for the community to come together and resolve minor issues Linking Words
along with
increasing a sense of loneliness in the older folk, who usually live alone, and the only form of connection for them is through Linking Words
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wonderful avenue.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
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