Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The present date all crowds gain study and knowledge because it's part of life and it is important stuff without study you not move to
next
level but as well as some other activities
are more important to a daily routine so In my opinion, I agree that unpaid service should be a compulsory part of education skills ofbecause
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more advantages of every one.
On the one hand,some people
say that unpayable activities
are important to all like sports centres into schools because that way
increasing health systems .In other words
,now time whole student and individuals more then
time spend on the internet they are not focused to sports activities
but study centres should be provided free service more than students join it and maintain self.For intense,Japan provides free access and after 75% of people
join it but before
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next
-level life that way
increasing good health level .
As well some other things are more important to live so university provides free classes about charity activities
because it's good for all ages because now time some people
do not carry something so young people
are taking this
type knowledge.other words,The tutor gives a free class about working for charity and more then
folks join it and carry knowledge about It.For example
,last
year my town schools were starting this
type period and 45%student after students working local clubs.For this
, that way
is good for all because in the future all people
not feel uncomfortable.
In my conclusion, the government should be provided free to all schools and university centres these types of courses because as well as studying it's more helpful in life.Submitted by gillgursant1 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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