Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

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Both
lecture
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and the reading
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the issue
certifications
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of certifications
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to
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for
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wood
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companies
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. The former is of the opinion that it is
good
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reasons
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to see
an equal
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an equal company
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companies
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.
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the latter provides three points to support his belief about
wood
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companies
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.
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with, the first issue we encounter is associated with
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to so much advertising. The speaker
highlight
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this
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theory is not convincing
due to
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the fact that
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do not trust the
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.
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, he demonstrates his point by saying that they are able to distinguish and
also
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American
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consumers
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claim
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own individual are confident.
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, he says that the agencies
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flavorable
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favourable
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product
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independent product.
On the other hand
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, the text posits that
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consumers
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are exposed to so much advertising that they would not value or even pay attention to the
ecocertification
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eco-certification
eco certification
label.
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, another topic of the debate involves
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ecocertified
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eco-certified
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wood
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. Once again, the professor points out that it is true that
Americans
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care a lot about
price
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.
Besides
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, he illustrates
this
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points
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by mentioning that
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care
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about the
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price
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along
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only when the
price
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goes up and goes down and when the
price
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different
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in
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between
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. two products like less than five
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,
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will choose the factors rather than the
price
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.
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, he provides that
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will increase value and protect
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eco-certification
eco certification
.
However
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, the article confirms that
American
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wood
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companies
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will keep their prices low rather than obtain
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eco-certification
eco certification
. To wrap things up, the final point in the discussion is connected to The
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suggests
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that
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wood
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companies
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should pay attention
what
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to what
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is going on
international
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with international
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company
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. What's more, he explains that if
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wood
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companies
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take it slow, the foreign
companies
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will go through the market soon.
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, the passage states that it does not make any sense that
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have to keep up with the developments in the rest of the world because
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wood
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businesses sell most of their products in the United States.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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