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Today it is common for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, technology is playing a vital role in human being lives they are inventing day by day new advanced technology which makes people's life very comfortable in every field as similar to our ancestor's era they faced a lot of problems throughout their lives.
Firstly
, a lot of businesses use different technologies for their
business
 growth.
For Instance
, because of covid-19 people face many difficulties in physical
meetings
 and they used many other sources for their meet up or conduct online training
meetings
. Both have advantages and disadvantages.
In addition
,
meetings
 through the internet may face some time connectivity issues and will disturb your call. agenda through internet and computer take place it saves your time and brings a lot of benefits for your setup and introduce to you many other useful opportunities.
As a result
, online
meetings
 could get you new projects and assignments for your company and your
business
 will go up rapidly and wonder your rivals
Furthermore
,
meetings
 through internet sometimes you face electricity problems which is a big issue in
third
 world countries.
For example
, there is another disadvantage of online
meetings
 maybe sometimes you don't know the person whom you are in interaction with is a real one or fake it's very difficult for you to believe him/her. online
meetings
 could lead you to a huge loss in
business
 sometimes your computer is not working properly which will disrupt your meeting. In concluded with, online
business
 and training
meetings
 have many benefits because they can save your precious time and gives you more confidence to talk with strangers people about the agenda and take part in other
meetings
.
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