Childhood obesity is a growing concern these days. How can we solve this problem?

In the life of a human and

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, exercising and eating healthy are the two most important

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you need to do to take care of your body and mind. Both

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, and eating healthy, have many advantages and benefits. They help with multiple

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needed throughout your life. These

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include growing physically, mentally.All of

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adds up to your body functioning in the highest and best way possible.

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or physical activity helps your body in many ways.

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helps control the weight of a human. It helps prevent people

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unwanted weight and helps people who have unwanted weight to lose it. For

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it should be really important to have healthy

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because most of the

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are still developing in many ways. The importance of healthy

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should be high because the

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one

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eats in a day reacts with how he thinks and does

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in

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. About the exercising

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really important to

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that when a

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weigh

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too much is not only that he/she is bullied but the

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feel

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bad about

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to and begin to view the world differently.But not only

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a problem when a

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is not eating or exercising properly because as the

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ignore these

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the

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gets more and more problems it will be physical,healthy,or mental problems. Let me ask

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question!What about the

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with financial

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and the

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's parents not caring about what their

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eat every day?

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will never know that in order to feel good he needs to eat more healthy.

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should show the

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that healthy

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and proper exercising is really important.

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you are gonna ask but how to do so? Maybe if the

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just gives an opportunity and shows the kids that there is nothing bad about exercising and eating more healthy they will want to try it too.Even if it is one day the

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should eat only healthy

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and

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. The

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can think of a game that the whole

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will like and enjoy playing because playing is

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really important in

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life. It will not only help physically but

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with social understanding against each other and developing communication skills. So in my opinion

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should be more serious and make a whole new

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lunch program by involving more healthy

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and exercising programs in order to show and teach the

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how important it is to

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and eat healthily.