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You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it?

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Dear Manager,                          I am writing
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 letter regarding the items I left in your taxi. I am Surya, I hire cab services on a regular basis. It was a Monday morning, I booked a taxi from Khairtabad to Hi-Tech city. The Cab Number was ASW1123QA.
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, I was running late to attend a meeting at the office. In a hurry, I was unable to collect all my belongings and I hope I left my wallet in your taxi.  My wallet contains all the important documents like my driver's license, Government IDs and
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other official documents which I will need in my daily activities. These Critical
document
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 are extremely important for my workplace and I need them As early as possible. I request you to please arrange a dispatch of the documents to my address or
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 please arrange a call back so that I can come and collect
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 your convenient time. Thanks for all your support. Hope to hear from you soon Yours Sincerely Surya
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coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and consistent logical structure throughout your letter. Ensure each paragraph smoothly transitions to the next.
task achievement
Use an appropriate greeting and closing to maintain a formal tone suitable for the context. Your closing was appropriate, but consider using a more formal salutation such as 'Dear Taxi Company Manager'.
coherence cohesion
Focus on presenting a single idea or point in each paragraph to enhance readability and organization.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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