Some teachers think that international student exchange programs would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweight the disvantages?

Nowadays, many teachers think that it is advisable for teenagers to join international exchange
programs
. In my opinion, not all exchange
programs
are suitable but I believe that the advantages are still more significant. The
first
obvious advantage is the opportunity to gain new knowledge. When
students
go to
study
abroad, they have a chance to speak the native language.
For example
, Thai
students
who apply for international
programs
in the US must be forced to speak English on a daily basis, which means that they can greatly improve their language
skill
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.
Moreover
, some countries there are have
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special or well know subjects that if they
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from these schools or universities, they will get advance opportunity more than other
people
.
Such
as, in
France
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there are have fashion schools top ranks in the world,
Furthermore
, there are
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full of equipment and professionals who have a lot of experience.
Secondly
,
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in international
programs
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able to take
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to
learning
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new cultures.
For instance
, Chinese
students
who
are
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study
in
India
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schools, they are might shock when they see Indian
people
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by using
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hand
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.
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the
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other word, when Indian
people
see
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use
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to eat food, they will wonder how Chinese
people
use
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as well.
In contrast
, Some
people
argue that
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studying
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abroad is spending too much money.
For example
, some families
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do not have much income to afford their child to
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exchange
programs
because it
is not only pay
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for education, but they
also
have to pay for rent the apartment and food too. In conclusion, I think
study
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international
programs
are
advantages
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advantage
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. There are arguments on both sides of the issue, but ultimately new knowledge and cultures show that ensure
students
improve themselves several factors.
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