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Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS HAVE BEEN USED IN EVERY FIELD EVEN IN
EDUCATION
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. USAGE OF TECHNOLOGY FOR THE PURPOSE OF
EDUCATION
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 PROVIDES SOME ADVANTAGES AS WELL AS DISADVANTAGES.
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 ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN HOW TECHNOLOGY MAY AFFECT A PUPIL’S
EDUCATION
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 LIFE AND DISCUSS BOTH PROS AND CONS.
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, THE INTERNET EASES ACCESS TO INFORMATION
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 NOT REQUIRED MUCH
TIME
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 AND EFFORT ANYMORE. ALL BOOKS, JOURNALS AND ARTICLES ARE ONE CLICK AWAY FROM PEOPLE
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 THERE IS NO NEED TO ARRANGE WORKING HOURS WITH RESPECT TO LIBRARIES’
TIME
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 SCHEDULE. TO ILLUSTRATE, IN THE PAST WHEN SOMEONE WANTED TO INVESTIGATE A TOPIC, SHE SHOULD HAVE NEEDED TO PREPARE, GO TO THE LIBRARY DURING WORKING HOURS OF LIBRARY AND SEARCH THE BOOK MANUALLY BUT NOW ONE TOUCH IS ENOUGH FOR ACCESS TO ALL KNOWLEDGE. SO IN HECTIC LIVES, THE INTERNET IS A
TIME
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 SAVER FOR STUDENTS.
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, THERE IS AN UNDENIABLE FACT
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 CALLED AS KNOWLEDGE POLLUTION. IT IS HARD TO FIND OUT WHICH INFO IS CORRECT BECAUSE EVERYONE CAN WRITE WHAT THEY WANT. LACK OF AWARENESS ABOUT
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 FACT MAY BE DETRIMENTAL TO
STUDENTS’
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STUDENT'S
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 EDUCATIONAL LIVES.
FOR INSTANCE
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, IF A DENTISTRY STUDENT LEARNS AN OPERATION FROM AN INCORRECT SOURCE, IT MAY BE HAZARDOUS FOR THE PATIENT’S HEALTH.
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 IT IS CRUCIAL THAT LEARNERS SHOULD BE DIRECTED THROUGHOUT
EDUCATION
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 LIFE BY TEACHERS. TO SUM UP, TECHNOLOGY IN
EDUCATION
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 IS A HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL TOPIC IN SOCIETY. IT IS THE FACT THAT ONLINE SOURCES HAVE EASED
EDUCATION
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 LIVES AS BEING
TIME
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 AND EFFORT SAVER
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 IT HAS ADVERSE EFFECTS
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 AS KNOWLEDGE POLLUTION. EVERYONE SHOULD BE CAUTIOUS ABOUT USING THE INTERNET AS A SOURCE.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-learning
  • digital literacy
  • multimedia resources
  • online collaboration
  • virtual classrooms
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • learning management systems
  • adaptive learning
  • screen time
  • tech-savvy
  • cyberbullying
  • digital equity
  • edtech (educational technology)
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