You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/ why it should be interesting - What equipment you will need for your speech

Dear Mr Singh, I am writing

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letter to get some information about an event that will be held in the international college. I got to know from one of my friends that you are the event's planner.

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, I am unaware of the date of the occasion. Can you let me know the exact date of it

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I have prepared a speech about my country

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is well known for its diverse culture, tradition, and different languages that are spoken by natives in different corners of India. The title of the topic is 'A wonderful country. It will be quite interesting because many activities will be held,

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as singing, dancing, and many more.

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, you not only invite the city council but

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invite Diljit Dosanjh

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is a Punjabi singer , as

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guests. I am quite excited about it. I am requesting you to provide me with some essential equipment for the speech, namely a projector to display images and videos, a microphone, and a laptop. So, I can present my speech clearly. I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Nov 3, 2025

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coherence

The letter is polite and has a warm tone. Try to place one idea in each paragraph and say the date early in the letter.

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In task response, give all needed facts in a simple way. Make the date clear, then state the topic and the gear.

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Polite tone and good closing.

coherence

Clear list of needed gear.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

international event
cultural diversity
unique aspects
traditional festivals
cuisine
art forms
contributions
global culture
understanding
cooperation
appealing
storytelling
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exploring cultures
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You will have a speech about your country on the international college event. Write a letter to the event’s planners about the following: - Ask about the date of the event - What speech you prepared/ why it should be interesting - What equipment you will need for your speech

Tell us what has inspired you to become a teacher and tell us why you think teaching is a good career choice for you.

Today more and more people want things instantly (eg: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

In many countries, shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effects of this on the shoppers and local community. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You borrowed an item from your friend. While it was in your possession, it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for lending the item to you. Explain how it got damaged. Tell your friend what you plan to do about it.

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?