In many countries crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those cause?

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Crime has always been viewed as the greatest problem of societies to deal with. Nowadays, there is a great concern over the increasing prevalence of it over the world. A great number of reasons and
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are being suggested by experts for
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essay will overlook two of those reasons that I believe are the main ones and they are proceeding with some
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. Committing a crime can be rooted in various social problems
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one of the most obvious
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is
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poverty. Unfortunately, the rate of
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, as the main reason
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it in the twentieth century, has been increasing over previous decades due to the mutual unexpected events that are
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occurring
not only in the developing countries but
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in
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developed ones.
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significantly the
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over the world and resulted in a great
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unemployment
employment
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, the lack of income and the increase of households' expenses have forced
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to earn the money by illegal means.
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technology
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is helping them in committing crimes.
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,
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fraud is much easier to be done these days due to the available
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compared to the past.
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, the easy way that
technology
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has brought us is enticing
people
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to do it. Despite the above-said reasons being grave, the
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are feasible. One of the practical
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is for government to control
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inflation
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and prices. To illustrate, if the government controls the products' prices ,
people
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will not be forced to do illegal jobs for a living.
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,
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inflation
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will not prevail and poverty will decrease. The other solution for
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phenomenon is to supervise the
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strictly in a way to
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the access of
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to the
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susceptible
applications.
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it will compromise the
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right of humans which is freedom, it is essential for the community to be kept safe. To sum up, the growing prevalence of illegal acts
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rooted in the superfluous living expenditures resulting from
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and
also
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the opportunity that the novel
technology
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has brought for
people
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to do so. I believe that these problems can be controlled by
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vigilant supervision of the government on prices and
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technologies.
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