Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment . Do you agree or disagree?

Some people reckon that authorities had better make residents

to

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take responsibility to pay attention to their own local habitat. I totally agree with

this

idea because it is in the general part and directly relates to their health. The foremost reason why I support

this

thinking is

because

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the local environment is part of

every one

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living in the region. The government can not handle

this

issue all the time so inhabitants are able to help them to take care of it. It is general to join hands in preserving the ecosystem.

For instance

, the voluntary juveniles in my

neighborhood

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raise

campaign

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campaigns

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to clean up the environment on a

regularly

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basis.

Therefore

, not only

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government have to take responsibility but dwellers should

also

share it so that the quality of life can be improved.

On the other hand

, the habitat should be taken good care of due to its direct effect on civilisation’s health. The environment always plays a significant role cause if it is contaminated,

this

will bring in

the

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serious consequence

such

as severe weather patterns and global warming, which is the culprit of various diseases.

For example

, dumping

waste water

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wastewater

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that is

not cleaned through proper waste disposal system contribute to

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fresh water

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into dirty

dringking

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drinking

water, which leads to

the

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cholera or even make

condition

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for the bacteria to get into our bodies easily.

Thus

, the more people were raised

awearness

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awareness

about

this

, the more diseases are prevented. In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that inhabitants had better accept to share responsibility with authorities to look after their own ecosystem because

this

the general problem that needs cooperations from two sides and it is decisive whether our health can be well-protected or not.

Appearantly

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Apparently

, all of us should take

actions

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to create a cleaner, greener and more livable planet.