Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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live in their hometown,where they lived for many years and grow-up.I think
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of their memories which happened there
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area of times age,and community can not be comfortable in other living closes.,
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we can stay in our home and take care of family,neighbours .There is an area of reasons why the community still live in their living closes.Maybe
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can not leave his or her home and still live there, maybe
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stayed there to take care of his or her family ,or maybe
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has not got to move on.For ,example British crowd do not move to another place , it is kinda their tradition which provides along
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time.And our growing up
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of our lives years ,only when we turn 18 we can move to another living closes,and after ,that we
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came to our living close where we born.There are a
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of advantages to living in that place where we were born.We can easily talk with our neighbourhoods and know them well, and we
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can trust them.I am Uzbek and in ,Uzbekistan a
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their hometown where they were born and it is our
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most important tradition to live with our family and take care
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family had good
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relationships
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because they know who is
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really amazed because of
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kind of life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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