Some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays,
Captain
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the Captain
the
society Says that automation has very increased all Correct article usage
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Over
the world. Fix capitalization
over
However
, I believe that Due to
automation there are so many advantages are
coming to human life. My essay will examine the views in the upcoming paragraph.
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To begin
with, firstly
, because of scientific Knowledge people's lifestyle become easier compared to the past. And also
there are the same positive impacts to
using the machinery. Change preposition
of
Secondly
, Most communities use their technical devices for learning, entertainment, study-related and so on. Such
as computers, laptops, mobile
phones. And Correct word choice
and mobile
that is
why they learn all kinds of knowledge in the whole world. For example
, In the present days, All nations are watching the news by using a TV, by using phone apps, by in the newspapers And these all things are possible because of machinery.
Moreover
, The transport facility is very developed through to auto-machine. As a result
, society can easily travel at a cheaper price as well as
it is consuming our time to reach that place. Furthermore
, owing to automobiles humans are ordering their food online. For instance
, he or she ordered a meal on online
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an online
websites
. They do not go anywhere the food is delivered within half an hour.
In conclusion, I think that machinery has risen all over the world. Fix the agreement mistake
website
consequently
, with the use of technology, he or she should not have to work hard or they do not have to put in the
extra effort. Correct article usage
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This
is how technology has blessed our lives.Submitted by Drashti satani on
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coherence cohesion
Improve the clarity and coherence of your introduction and conclusion. Ensure they clearly introduce and summarize the main points of your argument.
task achievement
Make sure to fully address the prompt. Provide more specific examples and elaborate on how automation has improved human life. Address both advantages and potential drawbacks of automation.