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You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away.

#work #month #manager #reason #length #week’s #time
Dear sir, I am writing
this
 letter to express my concern regarding
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 that
i
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I
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 need for almost a month. I will explain
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to you
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you
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the reason. My mother was sick
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past
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the past
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 15 days. I took her for
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a doctor
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doctor
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 consultation on Saturday. After completing all the required tests and scans they confirmed that my mother was diagnosed with cancer. They said that she is in
third
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 stage and assured some life span of almost three to four years if she undergoes regular chemotherapies for four weeks
in
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on
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 alternate days. So, I badly
need
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 leave for 30 days. As
i
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I
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 was given a project work to be completed by the end of
this
 month, due to my urgency
i
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 will get it done
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this
 week by working day and night restlessly. While
i
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 am away from
office
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the office
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, my colleague Raghav will be looking after my work and his work simultaneously with the help of
our
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another friend who
sit
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 beside us in the office. I hereby request you to consider my problem and sanction me
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 leave. Yours faithfully, Vijaya Madamanchi.
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