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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, there are several ways to promote new products. I believe that advertising is a good part of marking.
This
 essay will show my idea why advertising positive more than negative development.
First
 of all, advertising is significant to get correctly target
people
.
For example
, The skincare company just launched a new skincare
product
, which is special for those who have sensitive skin. They can use the advertisement to explain what is ingredients or properties that they are used to
people
 and
also
 show how
this
product
 is useful and beneficial to consume. The
last
 but not least, the advertisement is a good choice to help businesses to grow up.
For instance
, The seller can sell the
product
 with the promotion, which means the seller ensures the growth of their sales volume.
In addition
, for the buyer is a good benefit to decide to try the
product
 that suits
to
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their skin by seeing or learning from the
advertises
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 and
also
 be able
buy
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 with a valuable price .
On the other hand
, some
people
 argued that the advertisements are so annoying,
such
 as they received a phone call from a scammer and the junk E-mail that they are not interested in. These problems are happening every day, which is an impact on
people
's daily life. In conclusion, I feel that advertising is valuable for sellers and consumers. Of course, there are arguments on both sides of the issue, but ultimately that the seller and buyer are both get beneficial.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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