You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

#home #party #noise #neighbour #plans #addresses

Dear Mrs Fernando, I am writing

this

letter to you to introduce myself. My name is Ann Paul and I am the bank manager of CTD bank in

this

city and I will intend to move to a new house in your scheme (House No 124). These days I am living in Victoria and it is too far for me to come for work. And it is pleasure for me to move

this

fantastic surrounding as your neighbour.

Moreover

, in order to commemorate

this

, I organized a party on the 23rd of April 2022 and I arranged a musical band for

this

occasion. Before the party, I would like to know your ideas about any impact of these sounds on your peace and for your other arrangement on that day.

Lastly

, if you haven't any problem with our party, I would kindly ask you and your family to join us and we are more than happy to welcome you on that day. Thank You Regards, Ann

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