While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life ,there is a tendency for people to move out .What problem do big cities have?

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Well, big metropolises are indeed an opportunity to find a

job

. You might find a

job

that suits you very well, it is harder to find a

job

which makes you happy, in smaller

cities

. There is a tendency to move into big

cities

because you want a successful and happy life for your family. I am not saying that in the smaller

cities

you won't be successful but, in the big

cities

, the chances are many more. When too many people move into big townships, it will of course bring concomitant problems some of which I am going to mention in

this

essay.

Firstly

, the

city

will become busier than before and make it difficult for people to get around anywhere on time.

For example

, if you have an appointment somewhere in the

city

, it is going to take a while to get there.

Consequently

, if you are lucky you will be punctual, if not, you might be late for your appointment.

Secondly

, the cost of living will be higher in the big

city

, which actively demonstrates that you have to pay a lot more for services than you are used to paying in smaller towns. If you don't have a well-paid

job

, ensuring that everything is paid for is going to be a big problem.

Thirdly

cities

are always very noisy, which means that you have to deal with constant and loud traffic noises. If you like silence and peace it would be a huge problem for you to live in a big

city

. To sum up, everything I would say for those who are happy and successful in the smaller

cities

, it wouldn't be a mistake to continue to stay there end enjoy their life in that environment.

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While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life ,there is a tendency for people to move out .What problem do big cities have?

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