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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discus both views

#people #animals #zoos #discus
As a way of protecting wildlife, people use
zoos
.
Further
, they
also
 provide entertainment to the public.
On the other hand
, can people protect
animals
 by keeping them caged in the zoo?; are we not violating
thier
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their
the
 right to be free? As every story says there are two sides
for
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 a coin, and I will discuss both in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, many endangered
animals
 need a safe environment to survive and hopefully reproduce to protect their species.
Zoos
 provide the needed facilities for the people to assist these
animals
,
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 because they are safe and well looked after facilities.
Therefore
,
zoos
 can be used to protect ecologically important
animals
.
Furthermore
, they provide a form of education through entertainment. Looking at the various
animals
 and seeing them in their natural habitat is a very calming experience and an enjoyable one. It
also
 provides knowledge
ofis
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animals
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 behaviour and their environment.
This
 knowledge can be used to help save different ecological systems. The best example is the pandas. It is through studying them in these confined environments that scientists learned to help the pandas overcome extinction.
On the other hand
, humans are violating the rights of the
animals
 by keeping them caged in
zoos
. Many have made it a trade, and
as a result
, there are a lot of
animals
 that get abducted from
thier
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their
 habitat, later being sold to various
zoos
 around the world. Indonesian gorillas are on
such
 animal species that suffered through trade. As
such
, they not only lose
thier
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their
 right to live freely but
also
 it could endanger their survival . To conclude,
zoos
 do assist to protect
animals
 and ecological systems but it should not be conducted in a way that
thier
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their
 rights are violated.
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