Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, it is commonly believed that

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it is important for kids to start studying a foreign dialect in primary education rather than

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school. In my opinion, due to

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consider learning languages

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early age can bring about more advantages for

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compared to any problems that might come along. Despite the drawbacks below, I believe the benefits gained by very young

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learning foreign

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are extremely useful for their future.

Firstly

, when they start in primary school they have lots of time learning;

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, they get to know basics.

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, it is built step by step along with their native language.

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, the younger they learn the language the faster they can open up to the world and speak to different people from various cultures.

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, according to some, those who can speak more than one language are better at communicating with others. Another advantageous point is that

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it can offer students better work prospects in the future. Admittedly, there are some issues involved with that respect. One problem here is that older

children

are cognitively more mature and

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able to learn more with less input. Another negative aspect is that

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it might cause disturbance for some kids since not every child has the ability to be bilingual. In conclusion, learning dialects will help

children

in long run to become

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Hence

, if they learn it earlier the chance for them to be successful

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a young age will increase and

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the disadvantages.