In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that the world is changing very fast and innovations are all around us. While some people believe that

companies

try to stand out on the market

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the product in some way new, others argue that there is no change . I tend to agree with the former argument, planning to discuss it in

this

essay. One of the most significant

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is competitiveness.

This

happens because each company tries to emphasize that their products are better, faster or healthier in some way than

others’

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.

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, there are several

companies

which

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that

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make cell phones, like Samsung, Apple, Oppo, which try to conquer in order to make the

next

generation of the phone better than the previous one. To clarify, they work on boosting the properties of the camera, making the quality of the images higher,

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the cell phone memory or

to make

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the size of the product bigger. The exception should be made for Vertu producers, which concentrate their effort on using

high quality

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materials and diamonds

instead

of setting a new technology. The other reason is the market changes every day very quickly in

this

technological era.

This

is because a huge amount of effort is dedicated to

enhance

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the level of education, science and technologies in order to make new investigations, find

another ways

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of making

the

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life better and more comfortable. *2 min+ In conclusion, due to competitiveness between the

companies

on the market and upcoming changes, I wholeheartedly believe that the

companies

will continue to do their best at

promotion

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themselves as future-makers via offering something new to consumers.