In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.

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diagram provides information about the manufacture of frozen
fish
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pies and the main
ingredients
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of frozen
fish
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pies. The main
ingredients
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of a
fish
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pie consist of peas, fresh
salmon
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, sauce, and sliced
potatoes
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. For preparing process of
potatoes
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, the
potatoes
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which are used have to deliver up to 1 month in advance. Taking those
potatoes
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cleans, peels, and slices. After getting sliced
potatoes
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take those
potatoes
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for boiling and chilling before storing them until using them for cooking a
fish
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pie. In the process of preparing fresh
salmon
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, we have to use fresh
salmon
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which deliver to our factory within 12 hours or less and we have to employ a lot of labours and inspectors in order to remove waste disposal on fresh
salmon
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and examine the quality of work from our labours. The
first
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method of preparing fresh
salmon
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is that we will use lemon juice and salt to fresh
salmon
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in order to reduce the smelly scent. After that method, we will take them for cooking by using a steam oven.
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, we will operate our labours in order to remove skin and bones from steamed
salmon
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. After
this
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, inspectors will examine the work before using it in the
next
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method.
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, we have to prepare peas and sauce. After preparing the
ingredients
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, we will use those
ingredients
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for mixing them together. After mixing the
ingredients
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, a
fish
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pie is wrapped and frozen before storing and dispatching to other places.
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