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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities, Others, however, say that this would have littel effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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Many
people
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 believe that
sports
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facilities
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 will improve public fitness while others think that it would have less impact on public fitness that's why other measures are needed. I believe that
sports
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facilities
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 will improve public health, though other measures are
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 required. On the one hand, there is a number of
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 complexes are required for a growing population. As
people
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 suffer more from obesity and weight problems, they need to gym or
other outdoor activity center
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 where they can exercise.
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, more parks will encourage more individuals to go there for morning walks or other exercises. If
people
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 do other jobs regularly, they will be able to maintain good health.
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, most of the public lose their encourage after a few days later though the
facilities
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 are good.
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, alongside with exercise individuals take other steps to improve their physical condition.
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, many
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 are unaware of their diet or what they eat. They eat too many calories which are not reduced by only a few minutes of exercise. As an example,
people
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 nowadays are so addicted to fast food, which is extremely unhealthy for their bodies.
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, as healthy diets are much more expensive
people
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 are more eager to consume unhealthy packaged food.
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,They need to reduce meat intake and should increase vegetable consumption.The government should be aware of
people
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 by advertising more about health issues on social media. In conclusion, I believe that
sports
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facilities
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 will help to increase public physical fitness but they need to be aware of other factors too so that they properly use the
sports
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facilities
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 and are able to acquire a healthy lifestyle.
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