You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own

#bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. The reason for writing

this

letter is that I received an envelope from the bank yesterday and the

card

that was supposed to be in there is missing. I thought reaching you might solve the issue. Recently I opened my student account, and the bank employee told me that I would receive my credit

card

by post. I did receive a post, but I am worried about the missing

card

Furthermore

, I planned to pay my exam fees with the

card

, but I only got 10 days to pay my fee.

Moreover

, I have no idea about the terms and conditions if a

card

is lost. I would be very grateful if you help me with

this

, I will do whatever you want me to. I can even come to the bank if that can solve the issue. Please look into

this

as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Srinivas Varma.

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Task Achievement

Your letter effectively conveys the main points required by the task with a clear explanation, concern, and request for a solution. To improve, ensure all elements of the question are answered fully and directly. For instance, more explicitly asking about the bank's intended actions could strengthen your task achievement.

Coherence and Cohesion

This letter is well-organized, with a logical flow of ideas and effective paragraph usage. To enhance coherence and cohesion further, consider varying your sentence structures more and using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

169 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
confidential

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