You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. The reason for writing
this
letter is that I received an envelope from the bank yesterday and the
card
that was supposed to be in there is missing. I thought reaching you might solve the issue. Recently I opened my student account, and the bank employee told me that I would receive my credit
card
by post. I did receive a post, but I am worried about the missing
card
.
Furthermore
, I planned to pay my exam fees with the
card
, but I only got 10 days to pay my fee.
Moreover
, I have no idea about the terms and conditions if a
card
is lost. I would be very grateful if you help me with
this
, I will do whatever you want me to. I can even come to the bank if that can solve the issue. Please look into
this
as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Srinivas Varma.
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Task Achievement
Your letter effectively conveys the main points required by the task with a clear explanation, concern, and request for a solution. To improve, ensure all elements of the question are answered fully and directly. For instance, more explicitly asking about the bank's intended actions could strengthen your task achievement.
Coherence and Cohesion
This letter is well-organized, with a logical flow of ideas and effective paragraph usage. To enhance coherence and cohesion further, consider varying your sentence structures more and using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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