Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although
some individuals say that learning a foreign
language
is reasonable only if it is in order to travel or to work abroad, I would argue that these are not the only benefits of learning a foreign
language
for someone. Studying a new
language
would make you more communicative with other cultures.
For example
, you need to watch movies or read books
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different nations while you are learning their
language
, and it would make you more familiar with their culture and lifestyle. Making a progress in learning a
language
also
could make you feel more productive and pleased about yourself and it would boost your self-confidence.
For instance
, imagine in a company of friends you are the only person who is able to speak in a
language
other than their mother tongue. According to
others
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a foreign
language
is only needed for
traveling
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or working in another country, I would say it is totally wrong. Because nowadays there are many tools
such
as mobile phone apps that can help you to meet your basic needs of a foreign
language
like travel conversations.
However
I think for working in another country, it is better for everyone to be able to communicate in their mother tongue, but it is not sufficient, you
also
need to know their cultural habits. The other thing is that many developed countries today are speaking in English, so it is not that necessary. To conclude, I restate that learning a foreign
language
has more benefits than just being used for
traveling
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or working abroad. It could make you a more communicative and confident person.
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