You are taking a course at a local collage. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your lecturer. introduce yourself explain why you have not handed in the project yet request more time to do it.

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Dear Ammy, My name is jaspreet kaur. I am a student of your class in the cosmetology program. I am writing

this

letter because I could not submit my hair-cutting project on 28th April which was the deadline for

this

project. I always complete my all assignments and projects on time and get good grades but

this

time I got a high fever so I had to take two days off from

collage

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due to

which I was not able to attend any class for a couple of days.

That is

why I could not complete

this

task but I am well aware of all the ideas about

this

assignment. I am requesting you if you could give me some extra time to finish

this

and I promise it will not happen again in the future. I will definitely achieve what you always expect me to target. I hope you will understand my situation and allow me to submit my Homework. Thank you, Jaspreet Kaur

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single idea per paragraph

Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better readability.

greeting and closing

Consider revising the greeting and closing to be slightly more formal, e.g., addressing 'Dear Professor Ammy' and having a more formal closing line.

logical structure

Your letter has a clear and logical structure which makes it very easy to follow.

complete response

You have provided a complete response, addressing all the points required in the task, including introducing yourself, explaining the reason for the delay, and requesting more time.

suitable writing tone

The tone of your writing is very suitable and polite for an academic context.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

165 words

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