Some people believe that individuals are becoming more and more dependent on each other, where as others believe that people are becoming more independent from each other. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In
this
contemporary era, everything is changing very fast, including the way of interaction between people
. Some people
profound that individuals prone to become self-reliant ever than before, while others
believe that today's people
are more independent than in past. I find I am inclined towards the latter thoughts. In the forthcoming paragraphs, we shall see both prospects and my outlook on the topic.
As per some people
's viewpoints, the modern lifestyle of today contributes to increasing dependency. Firstly
, because of the economic matters. This
is, nowadays everyone tends to find a job in order to make sure he or she would not need to anyone economically. Having a job means ones would live in a separate house apart from other family members, which give this
chance, ones could make their personal ways based on their priorities. Secondly
, thanks to up-to-minute technologies many services including food, health and transportation are available at the touch of the bottom. For example
, you could order your lunch by your smartphone and get it in minutes. All these lead to fewer requirements interacting with others
so more dependency.
On the contrary
, others
advocate that human beings have become more reliable than before owing to various reasons, and I count my vote for this
statement. Primarily, the importance of teamwork has increased in recent years. If a problem or issue is solved by two or more people
rather than one
, the results obviously will be far more practical . As a result
, human beings tend to work in groups so they need one
another to have a better life. What is more, in this
modern life people
put their efforts to become experts in one
special area.
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This
means, in other areas, one
would be dependent on others
who have the related skills. For example
, if someone's laptop stopped working she or he would have to visit a computer engineer having the related expertise.
In conclusion, although
it seems that people
are getting dependent due to technology or monetary matters, the dependency has been decreased overall.Submitted by Fataremi on
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