You sent some documents by post recently, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want tobe taken.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to check on the details of my packet that was given to

Canada

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the Canada

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Post branch at Brampton. I was told by the staff over there that my packet will be delivered to the

Ama

as it is a

return

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returned

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item and

hence

did not pay for

this

. I have been checking for

refund

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a refund

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from

Ama

for the returned item and I got an email from them that my

return

was not received at their office. It is almost a month now and I am worried. The packet was a box and inside it was a drill kit

tool set

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with instruction on how to use it. It

also

has the

Ama

return

slip inside and outside I have taped the tracking bill that I printed from

Ama

Website. Kindly help me in

this

situation and locate my package as soon as possible as

final

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date to

return

week. I would really be happy if you could send me details

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what happened with my package, and I can explain it to

Ama

. I am waiting for your reply on

this

matter soon. Yours sincerely, J Singh

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You sent some documents by post recently, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want tobe taken.

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