Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Governments, police and policymakers have long sought ways to decrease

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. While some people believe that lengthy jail sentences are the best way, others think that there are better alternatives. In

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essay, I will consider both views and explain why I feel treatment and education programs are vital to

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. According to some, incarcerations, particularly for extended periods, is society's most powerful way to deter criminality, The rationale is that would-be offenders would think twice before committing a

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if they had the threat of prison, and all the discomfort, danger and stigma that it entails, in their minds. Indeed,

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is why many countries, the USA

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, continue to take a tough stand on

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by imposing increasingly lengthy sentences and locking up even petty offenders. Though

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may seem to tackle the problem, the soaring

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rate in the US proves

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. Others propose alternative solutions to the

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problems. Rather than sending offenders to jail, some systems prefer to use community service as a penalty.

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involves the perpetrator contributing in some way to society,

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as cleaning or helping on community projects, as a means of reparation.

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programs have had success

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serious or violent criminals,

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is not a viable option. In my view, even though imprisonment is still necessary in order to protect society from dangerous people, I feel that education and rehabilitation programs both in prison and in the community are the best ways to reduce

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rates. In Australia,

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, the vast majority of criminals have mental health or addiction issues. These underlying factors must be dealt with in order to prevent reoffending. Without them, released prisoners are bound to end up behind bars again. In conclusion,

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imposing longer jail terms may seem to be

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, other options are more effective. I feel that dealing with addiction and mental illness is key to driving down the

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rate in the long term.