The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present-day. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The world's population are significantly increasing,

as a

result

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causes is an enormous problem. In my opinion, there are only disadvantages to raising the population. The

first

problem is accommodation. At present-day build many flats

instead

of houses. Because in the world no place to live for future generations, so they must live ,and they will live in flats.

On the other hand

, in some countries like Japan and Italy their society is decreasing. I heard from people that, if a woman gives birth to a baby, the government encourages her.

However

, in Surya and

Nigeria

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the population is rising day by day. I want to say that the government should control, the government's responsibility it is- in my opinion . The

second

problem is air pollution, truthfully the world's pollution. Because many people inhale, the globe does not have many trees.

That is

no secret for anybody, the trees, plants give us oxygen.

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addition

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we must plant a lot of trees, plants as much as we can. To conclude , in my point of view, I totally agree with

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idea and,

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we should plant plenty of plants as much as we can, I mentioned above.