The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present-day. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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The world's population are significantly increasing,
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causes is an enormous problem. In my opinion, there are only disadvantages to raising the population. The
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problem is accommodation. At present-day build many flats
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of houses. Because in the world no place to live for future generations, so they must live ,and they will live in flats.
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, in some countries like Japan and Italy their society is decreasing. I heard from people that, if a woman gives birth to a baby, the government encourages her.
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, in Surya and
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the population is rising day by day. I want to say that the government should control, the government's responsibility it is- in my opinion . The
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problem is air pollution, truthfully the world's pollution. Because many people inhale, the globe does not have many trees.
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no secret for anybody, the trees, plants give us oxygen.
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we must plant a lot of trees, plants as much as we can. To conclude , in my point of view, I totally agree with
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we should plant plenty of plants as much as we can, I mentioned above.
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