There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the international music that is head everywhere nowadays?
Music
is everywhere in society. From coffee shops to elevators to working out at the gym, music
is around us and playing constantly. Music
is needed for society to function.
First
and foremost, music
helps you relax. When I have insomnia and can't sleep, I put on lullaby music
and it always puts me to sleep. I am not the only one who feels the same way
; I have read hundreds if not thousands of blogs recommending different kinds of music
that make sleeping easier. Furthermore
, music
is used as a way
to make friends. There are many online forums and gatherings based on music
such
as concerts and music
festivals. Many people go to these music
concerts to make friends. If for example
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concert
with others who like BTS, you have a common language to speak: music
.
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also
international music
. I believe that international music
is the way
of the future. Since English is becoming a language spoken all around the world, music
from other countries is becoming more and more infused with English words. Music
could also
be used to help political tension. One example of music
helping ease political tension is when a K-Pop band Girls Generation went to North Korea and did a concert
for the
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This
concert
helped connect the otherwise
secluded North Korea to the world and because of this
concert
, North Koreans became less secluded and even attended an Olympics for the first
time in over 50 years of their existence.
In conclusion, international music
is more ubiquitous and accessible to people because of the Internet. Thirty to fifty years ago, the only way
to hear South Korean music
was to go to South Korea and buy a
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