You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his-her help in arranging it

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Dear sir/ madam, I am writing to inform you that I would like to work in the company's head office in Canada for six months. let me explain in more detail. My grandmother lives in Canada. But

lately

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she fell sick. So, I need to be available for her as she lives alone.

that is

why I am asking

this

request so I can do my job and take care of her as well. I am sure that I can do all the work from Canada as we can do our meeting online if you needed.

In addition

, I will acquire more experience if I deal with foreign employees.

furthermore

, I will benefit from the diversity of cultures. I would be grateful if you accept my request and help me in arranging it. because you are always there for me in my difficult times. Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

Tharaa

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Tharaka

Fouda

Submitted by thraa58 on Fri Mar 25 2022

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8 paragraphs

160 words

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