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Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since humankind moved into the age of technology, there has been a contrasting dispute relating to the essence of handwriting.
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 many people reckon that we should not teach
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 writing, I still think it is important to
children
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 for its practical benefits. On the one hand, the digital revolution has taken over almost the world of work, leading to the fact that being computer-literate is one of the core skills to accomplish these days.
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, the requirement of computer-language proficiency and touch typing is vital in the working environment.
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, if an employee successfully applies for a manager position in an IT company, he needs to outperform other candidates in specialized knowledge and
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, many industries have changed to use technology as a means of communication, especially those in the commerce industry called E-commerce. Most of the time, to purchase or request information about the product, being competent in touch - typing would be advantageous.
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, handwriting is, in my opinion, undoubtedly essential. For the spread and threat of the pandemic, people need to fill in many forms to declare their history of
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 and if they are safe for others.
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 will indeed memorize and understand better if they take notes or write down the lesson, reinforcing the integration and practicality of handwriting in education. A typical example is to primary students, and writing will make time for them to acquire knowledge and have a deeper understanding. The script enables us to be more creative and thoughtful, as we can organize or convey ideas more legibly comprehensibly. To sum up, though we have become over-reliant on technology and dismissed the significance of handwriting, I consider that it is crucial and more flexible in the self-development of young
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