you recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. you want to tell him how you feel. write a letter to the singer: - say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear BHARAT, I am a huge fan of your musical friends. I love your all
song
when I was free at home while I listen to your
song
and was happy with it. Well, 2 days ago, a big event in Porbandar City, was held by the municipal corporation. I was really happy because you are one of the best singers at that event and your performance was outstanding.
Moreover
, I like your
song
since a child when I was in 5th standard because I listen to your
song
first
time when our school organised a farewell party and you sing a
song
. That time I was decided I will become a musician and I started to learn to practice with a drummer man. I am the best drummer since I was 10th. And
also
in many ,
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I take the part of the musician.
Finally
, if given the chance with your stage, I proved I am the best. And either you would like to give me a chance to play a drummer,
this
is your big help for me and
also
I will luckily that day when with you on stage. I hope you will look back forward soon. Best Regards
viram
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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